I don't know if it is allowed to ask for review of resume here at workplace. So is it good to ask for that here just like in codereview for codes written by peers.
I don't see this as practical for the workplace, even for a "resume review" site as we have a code review site. Ask 5 people for advice on a resume, you'll get 10 different answers. Not only is there variance from field to field, there's cultural and even regional variations that, IMO, would leave any querents more confused than they were when they arrived.